Cleaning up some "What Was I Thinking" moments
Saturday, 09 February 2008

I took a listen to my first song of the challenge, and, no, I'm not the greatest singer in the world, but I decided that my vocal decisions on several aspects of my initial performance, and decided to 86 some vocal parts and do some more punchins.

I decided I was trying too hard in the first verse, so I went for the more "subtle" approach.  I got rather breathy on the bridge, and got rid of some of the ham at the end.

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What do you think?  Better?  I mean, I see from the latest blogs posts on the side bar that other folks don't think they can't sing either, but, unfortunately, I have an obnoxious diva deep inside who will not be denied. :)


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 1 Written by the substars, on 02-09-2008 18:40
i still had first mix of this song that you posted on my desktop, serendipitously enough. 
 
anyway, i thought it was fine before, but the new mix makes the song sound a little more reflective than angry. cool. 
 
in any case, pretty good song. i'll be interested to hear the rest of your album!
 2 Written by Helen Sventitsky, on 02-12-2008 01:27
Thanks for all of that. :) If I don't kill myself, I should have the bare minimum of 10 songs by the time the 20th comes around...

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