Dang, this is hard!
(Sunday, 03 February 2008) Written by Strummindude

When I entered this challenge, I somehow subconsciously thought that once I commit to this, come Feb. 1st, all the creative juices will start flowing.

Boy, was I wrong. Yesterday was hell. The harder I tried, it seemed the more paralyzed I became. Then despair creeps in, and you start having negative thoughts, and guilt, and you really feel the pressure. "Damnation, I'm losing a whole Saturday here!"

I ended up finishing a whole bottle of wine, but instead of conjuring up some inspiration, I just got sleepy. So I went to bed, feeling the weight of total failure upon my shoulders. 

* * *

Well, this morning I got up extra early. I made me some coffee, gritted my teeth and sat down once again in front of that blank sheet. I hate blank sheets.

It's now 2.30 PM here. I have in front of me two pieces of lyrics. I prevailed, I guess. But it feels more like a victory of dumb stubbornness than anything else, like being hit by the muse.

They both tell the tale of one particular moment in time, kind of like a painting as opposed to a cartoon, I guess. The first one, "Would That I Could", is a recognition that triggers memories of a lost love. The second one is called "Do What You Wanna Do", and tries to illustrate the breathless moment between his proposal and her reply. And without further ado, here they are:

Would That I Could 

1.
That old crabapple tree
Seems familiar to me
Been so long since I lost my way
I stand frozen in time
As the memories unwind
To a place where I long to stay

If I could change the world
If I could just say the words
Would that I Could
Would if I Could

2.
For a while you and I
Were the storm's inner eye
Growing stronger with every turn
Taken in by the twirl
I was lost in the swirl
Had no questions and no concern

If I could change the world
If I could just say the words
Would that I Could
Would if I Could

  Bridge:
  These years of random wandering
  All the places I have been
  They never quelled my heart's desire
  To be with you again

3.
For redemption and grace
For my unholy ways
I would lay my whole life to bare
Be admitted once more
To the place I adore
Would I suffer to say a prayer

If I could change the world
If I could just say the words
Would that I Could
Would if I Could

 

Do What You Wanna Do

1.
In the garden, in the night dew
Sits a precious butterfly
Do what you wanna do
Do what you wanna do

If its wings could carry virtue
For a passage I would vie
Do what you wanna do
Do what you wanna do

I could wait until tomorrow
I could wait another year
Through the joy and through the sorrow
By the hope and by the fear

Heed the voice that calls within you
Know my love will never die
And I will wait until you do what you wanna do

2.
There are angels all around you
There’s a glimmer in your eye
Do what you wanna do
Do what you wanna do

Like a blessing to reach into
For my soul to purify
Do what you wanna do
Do what you wanna do

I could wait until tomorrow
I could wait another year
Through the joy and through the sorrow
By the hope and by the fear


Heed the voice that calls within you
Know my love will never die
And I will wait until you do what you wanna do

-

I'll try to get some rough demos up later, right now I'm not geared up for that. 

Bless you all,
S. Dude 


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  Comments (2)
 1 Written by John Paul Sharp, on 02-03-2008 09:44
remember, the point of the challenge is to have fun and to be open and see what comes out of you having fun. Keep everything as simple as possible and just build on that. The best music, I think, comes about when you stop thinking about what you're doing and your passion comes out instead! :) Keep at it you're doing just fine! jps*
 2 Written by Strummindude, on 02-03-2008 19:38
Thanks for the encouragement, jps. My passion is the music. I could likely crank out ten good songs a week. I just can't keep up that pace writing lyrics. So maybe some of the songs on the album will have to be hum-di-dummed! :-) (Listened to your first piece btw, and I can't believe you did that in just a couple of hrs... Well done!) 
 
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