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Re:Finally put some tunes up - 2008/02/22 19:42
Listened to your stuff, it sounds awesome, very good vocals and well-played, well-recorded guitar.
Only crits: On 'open sky' near the beginning it sounds like you're , eh, pusing your voice in some weird way on some of the consonant sounds. I have no conception of terminology when it comes to singing, but it's sort of a rick james effect which doesn't quite fit the song. The only way I can describe it is that you sort of emphasize and then pull back in a staccato way with hard 'k' or 'c' sounds. A very small detail.
Also, on a couple tracks it seems like your vocal levels vary a bit wildly- this could be fixed with a slow compressor or just modulating distance from the mic.
Hope these were helpful points, I really think your stuff is great.
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